
I set myself a doozy of a challenge this time. I blame Google and the rabbit hole of “types of poetry” search.
Villanelle is another very old form of poetry that came from France and has lots of rules. It is made up of 19 lines; five stanzas of three lines (tercet) each and a final stanza of four lines (quatrain). As you can see from the rhyme scheme; ABA ABA ABA ABA ABA ABAA, this type of poem only has two rhyming sounds. Plus, there is a lot of repetition throughout the villanelle. Line one will be repeated in lines six, 12 and 18; and line three will be repeated in lines nine, 15 and 19. So although this takes out the extra work of having to write 19 individual lines, the real challenge is to make meaning out of those repeated lines.
When April is remembered for its showers sprinkling
Washing the seedlings awake
And the Easter Bunny with eyes twinkling
Thoughts of garden parties bring
Sumptuous BBQ's of sausages and steak
When April is remembered for its showers sprinkling
Amassing eggs into the garden for hiding
Excited little hands to find and take
And The Easter Bunny with eyes twinkling
Maybe a spot of seaside esplanade strolling
Melting ice cream with a crumbly flake
When April is remembered for its showers sprinkling
The aromatic minted lamb roasting
And afternoon tea with toasted teacake
And The Easter Bunny with eyes twinkling
Seasonal attractions begin opening
Days out of fun and excitement to partake
When April is remembered for its showers sprinkling
And The Easter Bunny with eyes twinkling
I shall now go and lie down in a darkened room, lol. Happy Easter everyone 🫠
menhir1
April 1, 2023 at 3:01 pm
I’m glad you worked out the Villanelle. I am pretty darn sure I wouldn’t have had the patience. It’s a good bouncy refrain. You did really well. Happy Easter to you and I hope the bunny with the twinkling eyes visits you. Xxxxx
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AnneMarie
April 1, 2023 at 3:09 pm
Once I cracked the two lines that are repeated, it wasn’t so bad. Happy Easter to you and yours too.
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snowbird
April 5, 2023 at 4:20 pm
That’s rather lovely! Happy Easter.xxx
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